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Prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse , To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#prisons #people
Some people believe that
jail
time
 can put negative impact on the convict’s lives as they are surrounded by criminal people all the
time
. I partially espouse to
this
 statement.
Hence
,
this
 essay will discuss what are the conditions which the
prisnoers
a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war
prisoner
 will experience, following a logical conclusion.
First
 and foremost
,
Accept space
,
the convicts get
time
 to realize the after effects of their crime. It is true that prisoners get a lot of
time
 to think of their mistakes when they receive a verdict to spend years in
jail
 for the crime they committed. Spending lots of
time
 in
prison
 gets them frustrated and they realize to improve and be law abiding citizen. Not only that, they
also
 get duties in different departments
such
 as cleaning, cooking, carpentering and so on, from which they earn a little amount of money from
jail
 authorities.
This
 process teaches them to become self independent and work to earn money.
On the other hand
, in some situations, the individual prisoners get involved in bad company. To enunciate, they get
involve
Suggestion
involved
 with small gangs in the
prison
 and
concequently
(sentence connectors) because of the reason given
consequently
, they become more aggressive and dangerous. After completing their sentence in the
prison
, there are higher chances that they get more
voilent
acting with or marked by or resulting from great force or energy or emotional intensity
violent
 toward the society.s To
concude
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
coincide
Concord
, the
prison
 affects prisoners in different manners. Some people get worse in
jail
 and others ameliorate;
however
, punishment is necessary for all
sort
Suggestion
sorts
 of crimes.
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