Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your opinion
A Group of people
believe
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believes
modern
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the modern world
a modern world
world
, humans turn into far reliant on each other, some people, however
, believe human beings become more independent. In my opinion I completely agree with first group
since the complicity of today’s Suggestion
the first group
life
has increased dramatically and cost
of living in Suggestion
the cost
modern
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a modern world
the modern world
world
make
people more dependent
On the one hand, some people support the idea that new generation Suggestion
makes
become
far reliant on each other than past because the complicity of living in the fast changing Suggestion
becomes
world
has increased dramatically and I completely agree. Technology has overshadowed everything in our life
. It develops interpersonal relationship between people. For instance
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of occupations were not very complicatedAccept comma addition
past, most
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But today most of the tasks keep Accept space
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with latest technology and they being up to particular standard or level especially in being up to date in knowledge
abreast
requires
collection of skills to be done, therefor people are unable to do some jobs on their own and they have to rely on each other more to keep Suggestion
require
a head
in their job, at or in the front
ahead
furthermore
Living in modern
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a modern world
the modern world
world
has
several times as many costs as living in the past has. And family members have to cooperate and support each other more to meet their Suggestion
had
basics
needs.
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basic
On the other
hand some believe
that nowadays people become more independent. Suggestion
hand, some believe
Indeed modern
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Indeed, modern
life
provides people with different opportunity in order to enjoy an eraser life
. For
instance computer
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instance, computer
this
chance to do array
of things without any help just by a click. We have an easy access to Suggestion
an array
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of information that pave our way to be highly individualistic. Suggestion
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Further
living in modern world
lays the foundation
In conclusion, despite people have different v
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a modern world
the modern world
life
, I believe living in modern world
makes human beings more dependent on each other due
to complicity of Suggestion
the modern world
life
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