Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays,
food
has become
controversial issue
Suggestion
a controversial issue
for some consumers. Some of them believe that eating
variety
Suggestion
a variety
of vegetables and meat
form
a giver or sender
from
anyware
at or in or to any place
anywhere
in the world may provide better health, while the others are concerned about environmental and
economical
Suggestion
economic
effects. Both merits and demerits with my opinion will be explained in the following lines. On one hand, many
food
consumers are of the belief that there is a variety of
healthey
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
hearty
meals around the world and it is better to select the healthier items and import them.
In other words
, some countries are famous for healthy
corps
the yield from plants in a single growing season
crops
which are not
avialble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in other regions;
therefore
, importing valuable items may be
peneficial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for the local consumers.
For example
, some
countris
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
controls
in Equatorial
Afirca
the second largest continent; located to the south of Europe and bordered to the west by the South Atlantic and to the east by the Indian Ocean
Africa
have a variety of tasty and healthy fruits,
such
as banana and mango, which are not
avilable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in other countries.
Thus
, importing the missing items may be valuable for the consumers.
On the other hand
, despite the fact that tasty and
healthier
Suggestion
healthy
foods can provide a better lifestyle, it may negatively affect the environment and the
economy
. To illustrate, the long distances of transportation will cause air pollution because of
emitions
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
from ships and/or trucks;
in addition
, importing cost, including goods' prices and transportation, may negatively affect the
economy
.
For instance
, some countries in
Arabian Gulf
Suggestion
the Arabian Gulf
are
improting
the commercial activity of buying and bringing in goods from a foreign country
importing
improving
many kings of
food
from their neighbour
counteries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counters
which may negatively affect their
economy
and air quality.
Therefore
, depending on the imported goods has many drawbacks. Having manifested the above mentioned points, it can be concluded that shipping
food
for long distances has
cons
Suggestion
conned
and
prons
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
. In my opinion, its demerits outweigh its merits because it is
cosidered
carefully weighed
considered
detrimental
for
Suggestion
to
the environment and may negatively affect the
economy
in
long periods
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the long periods
a long periods
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • economically beneficial
  • local farmers
  • local economy
  • fresher
  • nutritious
  • food security
  • imports
  • preserving
  • traditional farming practices
  • biodiversity
  • limited variety
  • availability
  • cost
  • contributor
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