Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education is important to young children, especially the
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and
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of their own country. While I believe
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is the right thing to do, I
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believe learning these two elements of other countries that help children to have better views of the world. On the one hand, it is easier for people to understand their true identities if they are familiar with their motherland’s
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and
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.
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, a child can have a better plan for his future if he’s
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learned
enough knowledge about his hometown. No matter where he is planning to live or travel.
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, the child can have a clear view of how to contribute to his own country in the long term. He can
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learn the
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about his ancestors and the development of the family tree.
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, it is
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beneficial to learn more cultural elements outside people’s country.
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,
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have some similarities of the comparison around the world.
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, it can improve your understanding of your own countries’
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.
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, the world is becoming smaller because of the globalization nowadays. People travel to different places and even outside their countries more frequently. The international
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become more important.
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, there’re growing numbers of oversea students today. If these young children learn the
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and
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of other countries in advance and it is easier for them to adjust the
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of a brand new place. In conclusion, it is completely agreeable that the importance of educating children about their own motherland’s
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and
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. And I
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believe that it is helpful for children to learn these two elements of other countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • national identity
  • cultural heritage
  • historical milestones
  • cultural narratives
  • global awareness
  • empathy
  • cultural diversity
  • international relationships
  • critical thinking
  • comparative analysis
  • interconnectedness
  • well-rounded educational experience
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