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People prefer to use their own transport nowadays. Why is this so? What could society do to encourage people to use public transport?

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Nowadays, most of the people
use
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 private
transportation
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 in their everyday life
instead
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 of public
transportation
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. Since there are many problems associated with
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 means of
transportation
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 system, it is crucial for
government
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 to encourage people using public
transportation
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 more frequently. In
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 essay I will explain why people tend to avoid using public, and what can
government
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 do to tackle
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 problem. It is an untenable fact that people hesitate to
use
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 public
transportation
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 systems, because of several reasons.
Firstly
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, the accessibility to buses, subways and taxis is extremely limited.
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, if I want to
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 a bus, I have to walk at least 30 minutes to reach a bus station, which is not convenient at all.
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, the price of gas is quite affordable, so when it comes to choosing between my own car and
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, using a bus
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 to travel around, I will personally choose my own car, and I believe that most of the people think like me.
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, I believe that
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government
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the government
 could face and solve
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 issue easily.
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, they can raise funds for improving the infrastructure and accessibility of public
transportation
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 systems.
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, they can raise
public’s awareness
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the public’s awareness
 by talking about the environmental damages
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, such as air
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 air pollution, which is caused by the emitted gases from the numerous amount of cars all around the world.
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, the authorities could take
actions
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action
 in order to decrease the prices of various means of public
transportation
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, which would encourage people to
use
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 them more frequently. In conclusion, it is true people prefer their own vehicles to get to their destinations;
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, public
transportation
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 is the least popular means of
transportation
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 these days.
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,
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government
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the government
 could encourage people to
use
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 them more, by cutting down the prices, raising public awareness and raising funds.
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