Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The salaries of famous athletes have been widespread discussed among the community in the

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decade.

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, the comparison of their income to the one owed to

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more socially

important figures like doctors, engineers or politicians, has risen a strong disappointment throughout the population. Someone could argue that their incomes are exaggerated seen that people who make more reliable works may face critical economic conditions.

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, somebody could sustain that their income is appropriate to their ability and talent. I find myself

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agreeing

with the former

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opinion, although

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it might be due to my lack of interest in team sports. People debating against

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fact, sustain that

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deep gap between players’ income and other workers’ one, with more fundamental roles in the human society, is not healthy. Something to consider is that

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Denizens

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have been facing a tough time since the

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economic

crisis arrived in 2008.

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, a part of the community

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truly believes

that their gains are due

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many reasons.

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of all, sports workers are talented and work hard in order to maintain their

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performance

and their shapes always on the top. In my own opinion, I strongly disagree with the

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point of view. I have personally met worthy workers, of largely more important fields, with years of studies and fundamental skills who were underpaid and were struggling

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finding a job vacancy.

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, Social, economical, and technological progress are delayed and repercussions are visible on ourselves. In conclusion, the great power held by these firms is due to the quantity of people who spend money and time at looking the games and who lead rivers of money to be gathered therein.

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, they manage to afford to pay giant salaries to their Athletes;

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, until a football or a hockey match will be more important than researches on cancer, the cure of that, or the building of advanced infrastructures, the situation won’t change at all.