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Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Each and every individual is working to get success in his life.In
this
 contemporary era, people argued that hard-work and willpower only a way to achieve their goal.
However
, the rest of the people think that
money
 and appearance of the person
also
 plays a vital role to get
promotion
Suggestion
a promotion
.
Accept space
.
In my opinion, working diligently and courage both important to accomplish the task and provides more satisfaction to an individual rather than
money
 and the looks of the person.
To begin
 with, an individual who is working hard and with full of motivation can improve their capability which will be helpful to get a promotion because these factors are affecting on their working style.
For instance
, In a recent survey concluded that most of the people achieve their goals with hard work and encouragement.
In addition
 to
this
, both factors are essential to enhance the confidence and mental capabilities which provides assistance to think positive in every situation.
Besides
this
, persistently doing a great job and firm self-confidence gives internal satisfaction to the people when they promoted by their manager.
on
Suggestion
On
 the other hand,
money
 and looks of the person are necessary to obtain growth. But it is not true owing to the power of
money
 and physical appearance are not that much important as dedication and performance towards the assignment.Because wealth is an intrinsic requirement to complete the basic need of food, clothes and house to stay; whereas good personality of an individual is necessary in an office but it does not enhance the knowledge to do the task.
For example
, many people make their career in a company by paying
money
 to the interviewer and attracted with their looks, but unfortunately they are unable to understand the job profile. To conclude,
although
money
 and appearance are necessary for surviving on the Earth, but hard work and grit are crucial to achieve goals in a life.
Therefore
, people ought to be working hard with enthusiasm to obtain fame in life.
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