Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

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In today’s world, the number of advertisements has been going to viral, we can see it anywhere, on streets or in the media. In spite of having a great deal of positive effects, its negative ones are still considered enormous on people. On the one hand, advertising has brought numerous benefits for not only customers but

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businesses.

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, an advertising agency helps companies to tell the target audience about their brands, prices, product details which are vital for clients to select a suitable product.

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, many commercials inform consumers about a variety of different choices when they can compare to rival companies to have a good choice.

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, another advantage of advertising is that the advertising industry creates several jobs.

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, it provides opportunities for painters, graphic designers, and copywriters in creating logos, contents, and ideas for commercials.

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, advertisements, which contains funny and artistic content, can help audiences relax.

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, the spread of advertising poses a threat to people’s lives.

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, advertisers

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to convince consumers that buying the advertised things leads to happiness, which might be exaggerated or even distorted. Many buyers, who

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by vivid images of these items, misuse their budget for unnecessary things.

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, children can be easily influenced by advertisements.

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, they usually pressure on their parents by pestering and nagging to buy that commercial they have watched. Advertising is double-edged. While it can negatively affect a consumer, it is

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helpful in other aspects.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative developement?

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