An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend. In your letter  Explain the situation  Offer to make alternate arrangements

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Dear Selin, How're you doing, my friend? We haven't met since my

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trip to Baghdad about three years ago.

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, I feel so excited to spend time with you like

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good old days. I'm writing to express my deep apology for not being on time when you arrive.

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, despite the fact that I've informed my boss that I'll need the day off, he's called me about an urgent meeting that should be held in the morning

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and will long for 2 hours.

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to that, I accidentally broke my car left mirror.

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I've planned to clear my schedule on your arrival day, I still need to fix the mirror,

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, I'll be charged for a fine.

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, I don't want you to be worried because I tend to arrive

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the front gate as soon as possible. If you don't mind waiting for an extra hour, I would be grateful. I will look forward to meeting you

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Saturday, say hi to your beloved family. Take care, Anfal

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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