Do you Agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money ? Give reasons for your answer

Entertainment is

significian

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significant

in life ,so famous people

such

ac

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as

singers ,actors,

models

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and models

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who

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benefit from

this

field.It is

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that they are paid far too much

money

.In my opinion, I tend to agree that they deserve a high salary for their

delication

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dedication

and effort. First of all,as other professions,

celebritieshave

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celebrities have

to give a lot of time and relentless training

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effort in

the hopes of

shinning

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shining

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in the limelight .

For example

,, Korean trainees who spent many years efforting against

thounsands

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thousands

of ones

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to

reserve a debut .

Secondly

,not everyone has a rich artistic talent that has to go through the process of harsh training ,so that

thay

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they

can compete in a fast-firing work environment.

Therefore

,They absolutely

deserve

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be paid a high income for their efforts. Another argument in

favor

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of paying a lot of

money

for the jobs which helps

decuation

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education

decoration

and

healthof

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health of

health

community .In fact,

Professtions

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Professions

such

as teachers,doctors,

engineers

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have a more stable salary than well-known people.Because they do not have retirement pensions

then

they get older and the amount of

money

they receive depends on the

numberof

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number of

stickets

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tickets

sold

each

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concert and profit from the music product .

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the

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new celebrities just appear and the old ones have to try their best to bring the quality end trendy goods in order to maintain their social position.It is undeniable that famous people are influencers who have power in

media

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community to join them and their fans together to help the

disadvantages

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or donate charitable funds.

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Furthermore

,the spiritual contributions of celebrities not only help us to relax but

also

inspire the dynamic. In conclusion,I

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that celebrities appropriate be paid far much

money

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of money

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for their dedication.Because every

occupations

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are

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equal,no job is more noble than

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anyone

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any one

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,as long as they work true