Write a letter to a friend telling him about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend – How you found it?How it can help?How you use it?

Dear Johnson,
Last
week I was surfing on the internet about the health and fitness section and came across a website which is quite appealing. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the site I browsed as you are
fitness
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a fitness
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freak.
Last
week when I went to my doctor for a regular check-up, he advised me to do regular exercise to improve my health. I checked many apps and websites as a lot of content is available on the internet regarding
the
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apply
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health and fitness. While browsing I found a website that not only
help
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in
the
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apply
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weight management
,
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but
also
keep
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a calorie watch along with other activities
such
as water, fasting time and sleep.
Furthermore
, the site suggests the type of exercise and food required in a day based on the provided data by users. In case you find the content interesting, you can enrol in the program by providing your details. After enrolment, your credentials will be sent to your email address, which can be used to
login
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log in
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to
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the program. I hope the information will be worthwhile to you. Kindly reply
me
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back in case you find it beneficial. Regards, Barry
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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