The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

It can be seen that there are two charts about how happy people are when they are married and single as well as the happiness ratings of the children of people who are married in the USA. The graph compares the levels of happiness of people at different ages.
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represented
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Represented
by colours??I don't know if it would be necessary) According to the graph married are happier than unmarried people. It can be observed in the category married the
group
happiest are between ages of 18 and 29 with 45
percent while
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percent, while
the 55 to 64 age
group
represents the unhappiest category.
In contrast
, the largest
group
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happy
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the happiest
singles are over the age of 65 represented by 34
percent
,
subsequently
, people between the ages of 30 and 49 make up the
second
happiest
group
by 22
percent
. The
second
chart demonstrates an interesting rating the children´s couple have similar amounts of happiness. The happiest children are represented
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in
the
group
under 18-year-old with 44
percent
and other groups with a similar percentage, adults
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with
43
percent
and children
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to
18 years old 41
percent
. Overall is clear that married people are
happiest
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happier
arriving almost double of percentage compare with singles as a consequence their children are happy as well with the similar rate.
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