The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.
It can be seen that there are two charts about how happy
people
are when they are married and single as well as
the happiness ratings of the children
of people
who are married in the USA. The graph compares the levels of happiness of people
at different ages. (represented by colours??I don't know if it would be necessary)
According to
the graph married are happier than unmarried people
. It can be observed in the category married the group
happiest are between ages
of 18 and 29 with 45 Correct article usage
the ages
percent
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while
the 55 to 64 age group
represents the unhappiest category.
In contrast
, the largest group
of happy singles are over the age of 65 represented by 34 percent
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subsequently
, people
between the ages of 30 and 49 make up the second
happiest group
by 22 percent
.
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second
chart demonstrates an interesting rating the children
´s couple have similar amounts of happiness. The happiest children
are represented for the group
under 18-year-old with
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percent
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by
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percent
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children
with
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percent
.
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Overall
is clear that married people
are happiest arriving almost
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as a consequence
their children
are happy as well with
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the
similar rate.Correct article usage
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