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Band 7

Some people think that printed books are no longer needed in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books will still play an important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Thanks to the development of technology, nowadays
people
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 can store information electronically.
Books
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, as an important source of knowledge, could
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 be digitalized and stored in electronic devices.
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, some argue that
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books
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 are no longer needed since
e-
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books
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 could replace them,
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 I believe that printed
books
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 are still irreplaceable. Indeed,
e-
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books
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 have its advantages. Compared with ordinary
paper
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books
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,
e-
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books
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 are cheaper and offer better value for money. Most importantly, it will not take too much space to store them, so it is much easier for
people
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 to store and carry more ebooks. But clearly, electronic
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 have serious drawbacks as well.
First,
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e-
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books
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 are damaging to readers' eyesight. If someone stares at the screen for too long, it will be harmful to his or her eyesight or even cause more serious eye diseases. Fortunately, reading
paper
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books
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 is much less damaging to readers’ eyesight.
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, it is
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 an effective way to rest one's eyes and protect them from being harmed by radiation from a screen.
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, reading
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books
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 might decrease
people
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’s interest in reading. Recent studies have shown that
people
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 will be less enthusiastic about what they are doing when staring at a screen for a long time.
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, compared with
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books
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,
e-
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books
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 are more likely to be intangible, so
people
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's interest may drop when they are not able to touch them by hand.
In contrast
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,
paper
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books
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 are tangible and readers could be more relaxed when reading them. Imagine you are sitting on a comfortable couch, reading a
paper
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 book in the soft sunlight, so it will be more attractive for readers to read
paper
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books
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. In conclusion, no matter how advantageous
e-
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books
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 are,
paper
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books
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 will still remain irreplaceable in our lives.

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task achievement
Be sure to discuss both views comprehensively; the essay appears to favor printed books without fully exploring the benefits of e-books.
coherence cohesion
Work on varying sentence structures to enhance readability and interest.
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Use more specific examples to support your points, particularly when discussing the role of printed books.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional phrases to better link your paragraphs and ideas together.
task achievement
Balance the essay by dedicating a similar amount of discussion and analysis to each viewpoint before providing your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized access
  • carry thousands of books in a single device
  • eliminating the need for physical storage space
  • environmentally friendly
  • reduce the carbon footprint
  • adjustable font sizes
  • integrated dictionaries
  • enhance the reading experience
  • tangible experience
  • distinct smell of paper
  • do not rely on electronic devices
  • battery life or device malfunctions
  • perception of greater legitimacy and trustworthiness
  • academic circles
  • extensive reading materials
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