In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? disagree?

These days, the use of animals for some purposes

such

as food, clothing items, and medicine is very popular. While others argue that it should not take advantage of animals for those intentions, I partly agree that people should make use of animals rightly. On the one hand, there are good reasons to believe that things made from animals are essential for humans.

First

, animal products bring more nutrition and protein than organism products.

For example

, tuna or salmon are rich in vitamin and omega-3 which is good for human health, especially pregnant women so it could help babies have a better brain and healthy body.

Furthermore

, animal testing contributes to life-saving cures and treatments. Thank for testing from monkeys and mice, researchers have developed many medical breakthroughs

such

as peanut allergy, brain cancer, and

tumor

an abnormal new mass of tissue that serves no purpose

tumour

As a result

, it could save many people’s lives are suffering those diseases.

On the other hand

, I agree with those who claim that we no longer need to use items from animal bodies.

Firstly

, animal’s exploitation for food and clothing is becoming over and inhumane.

For instance

, behind the delicious

foie

undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind

feel

gras

Suggestion

Gras

plates are the force-feeding technique or the using of crocodile skin to make luxury handbags, which are worthy of condemnation.

Finally

, there is a big difference between animal bodies and humans being.

Therefore animal

Accept comma addition

Therefore, animal

experience results would give wrong answers that will lead to serious disasters if doctors did not carefully check within the studies. In conclusion, it seems to me that it is necessary to treat animals for appropriate

purposes but

Accept comma addition

purposes, but

the badly using animal activities should be judged and banned.

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