Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion..

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people work out for their fitness and well-being through daily exertional drilling, aerobics, and
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healthy food. They
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use prophylactically traditional remedies or modern
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tablets to improve their health. But, a few numbers of people
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think that if you follow the rules of ordinary
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you will be as fit as a fiddle.
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topic will discuss both sides of arguments in depth. It is our belief that he who has health has hope and he who has hope has everything.
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,
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fitness
starts in your head, you must choose to eat clean, exercise regularly, and treat your body with respect.
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, human bodies are designed for regular physical activity. if you take
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a balanced
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diet, you will take every
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that’s necessary for daily routine work .
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, a glass of milk with two
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eggs is
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breakfast which can energize the person
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until
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. But it is
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true that the exertional body movement In
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the morning
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can
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cause
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exhaustion, and drain
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energy. Even though, you can be addicted to your sports work. In
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of days, you can fed up
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your habitual Chores. By the use of orthodox or current
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precautionary
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therapy, you can get the side effect of overdose or reaction
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drugs.
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some individuals believe that if we go on with normal
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guidelines
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we can enjoy adequate health and proficient strength. Because you stay away from
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life
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schedule,
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by your favourite food, and have more fun time with your friends and family.
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,
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simple lifestyle Can cause
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of access to material resources, inadequate or poor quality social
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relationships
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, and deprivation
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services and amenities. So, it is concluded after
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discussion that bodybuilding, nutritious meals, and cautionary treatment are ideal steps of
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a healthy
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life
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but it can tire out and wear down your ambitious motives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cardiovascular health
  • Metabolism
  • Chronic diseases
  • Immune system
  • Mental well-being
  • Nutrients
  • Malnutrition
  • Obesity
  • Type 2 diabetes
  • Circulation
  • Nutrient distribution
  • Preventive health
  • Energy levels
  • Balanced diet
  • Essential nutrients
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