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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you degree or disagree?

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It is often argued that conventional newspapers will continue as the major source of news.
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 opinion is flawed for a number of reasons. On the one hand, the speed and convenience of the Internet in
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 digital age have accelerated the increasing popularity of online news. The key reason is that the Internet is likely to provide up-to-the minute news as it happens, 24 hours a day every day. Only with the smart phone or the laptop, everyone could connect almost instantly to the Internet, surf the websites and access the news of their choices across the globe.
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, in contemporary society, a growing number of people have access to the Internet and
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 trend would be able to increase
continually
at every point
continuously
. The more widespread the accessibility of the internet, the more people could appreciate the value of it as their useful news resource.
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. The lack of popularity of newspapers could
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derive
 from some drawbacks. The cost is considered one major discouragement of relying on newspapers as a news source. Competing with freely available news online, newspaper publishers are facing the reality of reducing profits remarkably. Some major newspapers in the world
have now represented
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now represent
online version
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the online version
 alongside their printed editions in an attempt to keep pace with
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 trend. Time-consuming is seen as another disadvantage of newspapers. The process of editing, printing, and distributing turns to be a weakness that
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leads
 to newspapers fail to meet the instant quest for news of modern news readers. In conclusion, I would argue that the importance of newspapers could continue to decline, and there are a growing number of using the Internet to access the news.
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