Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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Nowadays, university education is becoming popular and many companies are requiring that job applicants must have a degree to be able to apply for certain jobs. Many people believe that tertiary education should

enroll

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both genders equally in every class. I disagree with

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statement for various reasons. Some people think that universities should admit the same number of male and females in each course for both genders to get

equal job opportunity

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an equal job opportunity

equal job opportunities

in every sector.

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not possible because some courses require a lot of physical activities

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as manufacturing industries or engineering.

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, women might be successful in different areas than men and

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requires them to attend different classes where the majority is women.

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, in Lebanon, we see women nurses more than

men nurses

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men as nurses

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, you can see that school teachers is dominated by women.

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, the ratio should be considered for every course.

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, it is not possible to admit both genders equally due to several reasons. Some universities accept student based on ranking criteria

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as IETLS exams or any other

exam which

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requires a certain score to be me.

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, many jobs require heavy field work and the ability to lift heavy weights which will be a nightmare for women workers. The construction field is an example which requires lifting concrete and structure steels and

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impossible for women worker to do. In conclusion,

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many universities might think about

courses enrollment

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courses, enrolment

courses enrolment

equality between men and women. I strongly believe that

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cannot be achieved at least in the forthcoming future.

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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