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Some people believe money is the best gift for teenegers, while others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

#people #money #gift #teenegers
.TEENAGERS HAVE INFLUENCE FROM HOW THEIR PARENTS TEACH THEM TO BE. CERTAIN FOLKS ARGUE THAT IT IS A GOOD IDEA TO GIVE CURRENCY AS SOUVENIR TO THE ADOLESCENCE. WHEREAS, FEW FOLKS OPPOSE
THIS
 NOTION.
THIS
 ARGUMENTS HAVE SEVERAL REASONS TO SUPPORT. ACCORDING TO
THIS
 ESSAY VIEWS, WEALTH AS A GIFT SHOULD BE BASED ON REQUIREMENT OF THE SITUATION RATHER THAN JUST GIVING TO THEM.
HENCE
,
THIS
 ESSAY WILL DISCUSS MAJOR REASON FOR ABOVE BELIEVE. ON THE ONE HAND, THE GIFT OF CURRENCY IS BENEFICIAL TO THE TEENAGERS WHEN THEY USE IT IN A RIGHT WAY LIKE THEY BUY THINGS WHICH ARE NECESSARY FOR THEM TO OWN.
THIS
 WOULD SATISFY THEIR NEEDS AND FULFIL THE REQUIREMENTS OF THEIR CURRENT CONDITION. FORINSTANCE, AS PER THE OXFORD UNIVERSITY STUDENTS STUDY, 70% OF THE YOUTH WITH AT THEIR ADOLESCENCE AGE USED TO BUY THEIR STUDY MATERIALS.
THIS
 WOULD DECLINE THE BURDEN ON THE GUARDIANS.
ON THE OTHER HAND
 , SOME PEOPLE DISAGREE BECAUSE IT MAY DESTROY THEIR LIFE IF USED IN A WRONG WAY. WHEN THEY ARE BEING STUBBORN, THAT TIME THEY JUST THING OF SATISFYING THEIR DESIRE AFTER LOOKING SOMEONE ELSE'S STATUS RATHER THAN THINKING OF NEGATIVE IMPACT OF IT.
AS A RESULT
, THEY END UP WASTING MONEY
INSTEAD
 OF USING IT RIGHT WAY AND
THIS
 WOULD HAVE DETRIMENTAL IMPACT ON THEIR FUTURE.
FOR EXAMPLE
 , ACCORDING TO THE YOUTH DEPARTMENT DATA OF THE INDIA, 80% OF THE ADOLESCENCE ARE UNSUCCESSFUL AND JUST ENJOYING LIFE WITH THEM MONEY OF THEIR PARENTS DUE TO NOT ENOUGH UNDERSTANDING THE VALUE OF CURRENCY.
THIS
 IN CONCLUSION, IF THE GIFT IS GIVEN WHEN WITHOUT MATURE UNDERSTANDING, IT COULD RUIN THE YOUNGERS LIVELIHOOD.
THEREFORE
 , ONE SHOULD THINK OF THE CONSEQUENCE OF PROVIDING MONEY AS SOUVENIR TO THE TEENAGERS
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