the three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school on 1982,1991 and 2001.
The pie charts illustrate how the yearly cost changed in a certain school in the
Unite
Kingdom Correct your spelling
United
among
1981, 1991 and 2001.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the proportion of teachers’ salaries still remained the highest to school spending and the
insurance kept the least part of all. Correct article usage
apply
While
the expenditure in
equipment and insurance increased significantly, a decrease can be seen in the percentage of other workers’ Change preposition
on
wage
and resources Fix the agreement mistake
wages
as
books.
The largest proportion, teachers’ salaries, Correct quantifier usage
such as
had
rose slightly from 40% Unnecessary verb
apply
in1981
to 45% in 2001 with some fluctuation in 1991. Correct your spelling
in 1981
Similarly
, there was a drop of
furniture and equipment from 15% in 1981 to 5% in 1991 before growth to 23% in 2001.
There was Change preposition
in
a
upward trend Change the article
an
could
be found that the expenditure on insurance grew to 8% Correct pronoun usage
which could
at the end
of this
period. In contrast
, the salaries of other staffs
declined from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001. But the cost of resources like books rose by 5% from 15% to 20% in the middle of the period, Fix the agreement mistake
staff
then
fell to 9% in 2001.Submitted by ZoeyChen on
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