Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that too much
efforts
Suggestion
effort
are made
at education systems for theoretical whereas opportunities for practicing has been missed out from schools and universities in every level. I totally agree that practical aspects have not been considered in the educational systems.
In my opinion, if students are taught theories with no experience, there would not be effective learning. Suggestion
is made
As a result
, practice should be provided as an essential part of productive teaching system
. Suggestion
a productive teaching system
Also
, mark
Suggestion
marked
contrast would
have had happened Accept comma addition
contrast, would
for
growing talents who are more visual than Suggestion
to
theorical
. concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
For example
, mathematic
is a base for Suggestion
mathematics
further
studying that is
difficult for most students to understand and enjoy, but if it
it is
it's
being
linked to real life and usage of math to manage finance, would make it more motivation to learn. So, it helps children understand money value and gradually become more monetary independent.
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
On the other hand
, providing practical environment is not necessary by some people and
factual matters are seen enough during educating years. Accept comma addition
people, and
In other words
, from their views schools and universities are responsible for providing factual subjects. Also
, students should focus on only studying than having pressure to practice and then
they would have opportunity
to perform their taught. Suggestion
the opportunity
an opportunity
For instance
, students can practice by being a volunteer after graduation in workplace in different industries such
as accounting company to test their mathematic skills. That is
why that there should not be rush
for practicing.
In conclusion, Suggestion
rushed
although
, parents, teachers and trainers are responsible for teaching facts to children, some policies should be formulated by the government to improve and develop skills by practical courses which paves the way to efficient educational system
.Suggestion
the efficient educational system
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