Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that too much
efforts
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effort
are made
Suggestion
is made
at education systems for theoretical whereas opportunities for practicing has been missed out from schools and universities in every level. I totally agree that practical aspects have not been considered in the educational systems. In my opinion, if students are taught theories with no experience, there would not be effective learning.
As a result
, practice should be provided as an essential part of
productive teaching system
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a productive teaching system
.
Also
,
mark
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marked
contrast would
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contrast, would
have had happened
for
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to
growing talents who are more visual than
theorical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
.
For example
,
mathematic
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mathematics
is a base for
further
studying
that is
difficult for most students to understand and enjoy, but if
it
it is
it's
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
linked to real life and usage of math to manage finance, would make it more motivation to learn. So, it helps children understand money value and gradually become more monetary independent.
On the other hand
, providing practical environment is not necessary by some
people and
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people, and
factual matters are seen enough during educating years.
In other words
, from their views schools and universities are responsible for providing factual subjects.
Also
, students should focus on only studying than having pressure to practice and
then
they would have
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to perform their taught.
For instance
, students can practice by being a volunteer after graduation in workplace in different industries
such
as accounting company to test their mathematic skills.
That is
why that there should not be
rush
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rushed
for practicing. In conclusion,
although
, parents, teachers and trainers are responsible for teaching facts to children, some policies should be formulated by the government to improve and develop skills by practical courses which paves the way to
efficient educational system
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the efficient educational system
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • education system
  • curriculum
  • factual knowledge
  • practical skills
  • critical thinking
  • problem solving
  • academic achievement
  • real-world application
  • balance
  • integration
  • learning outcomes
  • employment opportunities
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