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In spite of the advances made in agricultural, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Since from the beginning of the twentieth century, the scientific approaches in every field of the study have been boosted up, made a plenty of ideas and techniques available in our life. The agricultural area which is the meeting point of the various fundamental sciences has been reached to a quite high level from the research point of view. With the help of these advances, it made us possible to plant any kinds of plants anywhere with our desired sizes and shapes. Despite the fact that, in many countries around the world are still struggling because of hunger.
Thus
, here, I would like to discuss some possible reasons and suggest a decision to deal with from my point of view.
Firstly
, as I mentioned earlier in my essay, many researchers have conducted studies, but only in well-developed countries. Those nations possess the patents of their specific methods. To hold that knowledge, the other countries need to pay and get trained by the specialist which requires an enormous amount of time and money. If the country is not financially capable of that, those agricultural advances are not available for them. Mostly, those kind of countries are tended to be the victims of hunger.
For example
, when we start to discuss about the lack of the supply issue, the African countries pop up in everyone’s mind. Apparently, the Africa can be the classic case for
this
 statement. Since they don’t have a budget to attend or possess the knowledge, it is useless, even though, there are so many approaches have been found every day.
Secondly
, an another way to spread is an exporting the agriculturally modified, inexpensive products.
However
, again a problem arises which relates to the location of the exporting countries.
For instance
, some of the African countries have no sea outlets, and surround by huge mountains. In
this
 case, the shipping cost is added at the original price of the products. Eventually, the price will still stay expensive when it is sold in the consumer countries.
However
, there are many ways to save them from starving. One of the most useful way is that the countries that possess the patents should train locals, and share their knowledges voluntarily, totally not for profits, but only for humanity.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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