Some people think that students at school and university can learn more from teachers and lessons than from TV and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid progression of the internet has paved the way for
distancelearning
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distance learning
.
However
, it is still considered by many people that students
canlearn
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can learn
better from traditional methods like teachers and lessons than
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modern methods
such
as TV and the internet. I completely agree that traditional ways
havemore
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have more
impact on students because teachers can stimulate interest and
teachaccording
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teach according
to the need of students.
Firstly
, it is an undeniable fact that interested students learn
betterand
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better and
perform better. A student studying by
himselfthrough
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himself through
the internet and TV 
mayget
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may get
bored and stop studying but
on the other hand
, learning
fromteachers
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from teachers
and lessons students can interact with each other and learn in groups.It helps them to stay focused, motivated and at the same time their doubts
canbe
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can be
cleared immediately. According to a survey, 90% of students
concentratebetter
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concentrate better
in the presence of a teacher.
Secondly
, teachers do not only teach, they observe their students
aswell
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as well
. They can identify the weak points and the needs of a student. It is
oftennoticed
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often noticed
that teachers modify their lessons according to the need of
class
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a class
andgenerate
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and generate
new strategies to teach. The teacher
canprovide
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can provide
a faster and simpler way to present information to the students.
Theycan
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They can
come down to the level of a student and so are definitely better than computers. 
In addition
, teachers
arerole
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are role
models for students.
Finally
, in
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my opinion
, no doubt TV and the Internet are
veryeducational
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very educational
these
days but
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days, but
students
definitelylearn
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definitely learn
more from the teachers. Technology can never replace teachers and lessons.
Submitted by Tarushi Jain on

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