Some people think that students at school and university can learn more from teachers and lessons than from TV and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The rapid progression of the internet has paved the way for
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distance learning
However
, it is still considered by many people that students canlearn
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can learn
modernmethods
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modern methods
such
as TV and the internet. I completely agree that traditional ways havemore
impact on students because teachers can stimulate interest and Suggestion
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teachaccording
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teach according
Firstly
, it is an undeniable fact that interested students learn betterand
perform better. A student studying by Suggestion
better and
himselfthrough
the internet and TV Suggestion
himself through
mayget
bored and stop studying but Suggestion
may get
on the other hand
, learning fromteachers
and lessons students can interact with each other and learn in groups.It helps them to stay focused, motivated and at the same time their doubts Suggestion
from teachers
canbe
cleared immediately. According to a survey, 90% of students Suggestion
can be
concentratebetter
in the presence of a teacher.Suggestion
concentrate better
Secondly
, teachers do not only teach, they observe their students aswell
. They can identify the weak points and the needs of a student. It is Suggestion
as well
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that teachers modify their lessons according to the need of Suggestion
often noticed
class
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a class
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new strategies to teach. The teacher Suggestion
and generate
canprovide
a faster and simpler way to present information to the students. Suggestion
can provide
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come down to the level of a student and so are definitely better than computers. Suggestion
They can
In addition
, teachers arerole
models for students.Suggestion
are role
Finally
, in myopinion
, no doubt TV and the Internet are Suggestion
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students Accept comma addition
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definitelylearn
more from the teachers. Technology can never replace teachers and lessons.Suggestion
definitely learn
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