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Some people say that technology such as mobile phones (cell phones) is destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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The number of people whom have their own cell phone rocket dramatically in the
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 years.
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, many people concern about how widely the
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 of
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 affects the socialization. In my perspective, the overuse of
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 has been harmful for relationship among people. Of course that
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 has been useful for majority of fields around the world.
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, the growth in
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 of devices
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 as mobile phones was significant comparing at least ten years.
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, these devices have come up among people earlier than a few years ago.
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, it is possible notice in public places
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 as shopping mall, many kids with their own cell phone playing on several programs created especially for children and infants “have some fun” alone.
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, apps have been created to reach each specific age and cover all people who want to stay away from others. Another point to consider is that social media has been contributing to social distancing in a silent way.
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, these days, on birthdays, people replace an embrace or a phone call for text messages and
emoji
an iconic mental representation
image
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 which was created
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 to make conversations shorter. Even more, there are distinct virtual cards developed to sum up what to say on special days.
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, it seems that the
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 of
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 is making people unconsciously stay far from families and friends and sometimes cannot notice that it happen. To conclude,
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 and social media seem to be the mainly reason to provide a crack on social interaction.
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, the
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 of these things and high tech lifestyle seems to continue increasing in
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next years
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the next years
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