You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: * explain the reason for the party * give the date and time of the party * suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Dear Sara I hope you are doing well. I am Mary and I decided to write a letter to tell you about my

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for Mike's birthday. I am not sure if you know Mike or not. He is a handsome and kind boy

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, unfortunately, always looks upset and never laughs. Merely smiles. I think

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depression is related to being far from family. As I realize, His father has died and his mother is alone. He often thinks about his family.

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these, I looked for his date of birth and I decided to hold a birthday party for him to lift his spirits. He was born on the first of October and luckily, it is at the weekend. I think it would be fine if we start at

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pm. I checked the weather forecast and I am sure the weather will be perfect on that day.

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, it would be excellent If his mother came. I am thinking about some ways to bring his mother. I will bake a cake and buy candies.

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, I am going to bring DJs in order to have suitable music. Please blow some balloons and bring them. Since

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I am not able to do so! I have designed some greeting cards. The address and date will be written on them and next session, I will give you them. I am looking forward to your answer. It would be very exciting and

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, effective to express our love and attention to Mike. I am sure that he will be very happy. Sincerely H