Some people belive that museums should be free to everyone and not charge an entry fee. To what extent do you agree ?

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Museums offer us the opportunity to learn about a variety of subject areas in more depth,
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or nature. While it is possible to go to some museums for free, the majority of the require a visitor's fee.
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essay will argue that all museums should be free to everyone. One reason is that
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the museum
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an excellent source of education. They help us to understand our culture, and other people's culture, better
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displaying objects from our past.
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, at the British Museum you can see objects from around the world which help us to understand world
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. When museums charge people to enter, not everyone is able to pay and so
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to a considerable degree; very much
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people have the opportunity to learn about that
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. Another reason is that when a museum charges, it only really affects people on lower incomes in society. Wealthier people
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able to afford to visit and
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will become more educated.
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, people on lower incomes will be less likely to afford a visit and will
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not benefit from the museum in the same way. The effect of
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is that not everyone has the same educational opportunities as others in our society. In conclusion, I would suggest that free entry to museums
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to learn about
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and culture.
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, for
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to be possible, the government will have to provide funding for the museums. Without money from visitors or government funds, museums will not be able to find, buy, take care of
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display historical objects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accessibility
  • Cultural heritage
  • National identity
  • Educational resource
  • Commercialization
  • Transactional experience
  • Maintenance
  • Acquisitions
  • Revenue
  • Government subsidies
  • Feasibility
  • Nuanced perspective
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