Technology has changed the way people communicatr today. Some people belive this is making our relationship stronger while others believe it is harming them. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Technology
has altered the way we live right now. Many things have changed, including the way people communicate today. Before
technology
has changed, to communicate with people we
should met
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should meet
them somewhere or texted them letter to
postoffice
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post office
. But
nowdays
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
,
technology
offer
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offers
us many practical
way
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ways
to reach people. There are many social media
app
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apps
to reach people. The problem is some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
this
is stronger their
relationshop
a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
and some believe it is harming them. In
this
essay we will discuss both points of view.
Firstly
,
technology
through social media reach us easily and offer us many benefits.
For example
, if we miss our friends or families we can just take our
phonevand
call them. Even, we can see their face from
phone
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the phone
. Not just a phone call, we can easily text them.
This
stronger our relationship because we can reach us easily
anytime
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any time
.
Secondly
, we can more friends through
online platform
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an online platform
online platforms
the online platform
.
This
will give us more connection. In the other hand,
technology
hasn't just offer
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hasn't just offered
us practical ways. There
are
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is
also
negative impact in order to communicate
to
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with
people.
For instance
, we know
someonebnew
from
online but
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online, but
we don't really know who they are. They can be
fraud
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a fraud
. There many
case
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cases
about misconduct and fraud now through social media. Another reason why it is harming is because we rarely meet people because we only see
then
objective case of they
them
through
technology
.
This
is really unfortunate because the connection that we have is just about online not real. Another case that I found, people expect more from their online friends and when it comes to
reality they
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reality, they
are just different and let people down. In conclusion, I suggest that we should open ourself to a
technology
changes. But, don't let
technology
fool us. We should be more careful and values life.
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