Technology has changed the way people communicatr today. Some people belive this is making our relationship stronger while others believe it is harming them. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Technology
has altered the way we live right now. Many things have changed, including the way people communicate today. Before technology
has changed, to communicate with people we should met
them somewhere or texted them letter to Suggestion
should meet
postoffice
. But Suggestion
post office
nowdays
, the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
technology
offer
us many practical Suggestion
offers
way
to reach people. There are many social media Suggestion
ways
app
to reach people. The problem is some people Suggestion
apps
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
this
is stronger their relationshop
and some believe it is harming them. In a relation between people; ('relationship' is often used where 'relation' would serve, as in 'the relationship between inflation and unemployment', but the preferred usage of 'relationship' is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
this
essay we will discuss both points of view.
Firstly
, technology
through social media reach us easily and offer us many benefits. For example
, if we miss our friends or families we can just take our phonevand
call them. Even, we can see their face from phone
. Not just a phone call, we can easily text them. Suggestion
the phone
This
stronger our relationship because we can reach us easily anytime
. Suggestion
any time
Secondly
, we can more friends through online platform
. Suggestion
an online platform
online platforms
the online platform
This
will give us more connection.
In the other hand, technology
hasn't just offer
us practical ways. There Suggestion
hasn't just offered
are
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is
also
negative impact in order to communicate to
people. Suggestion
with
For instance
, we know someonebnew
from online but
we don't really know who they are. They can be Accept comma addition
online, but
fraud
. There many Suggestion
a fraud
case
about misconduct and fraud now through social media. Another reason why it is harming is because we rarely meet people because we only see Suggestion
cases
then
through objective case of they
them
technology
. This
is really unfortunate because the connection that we have is just about online not real. Another case that I found, people expect more from their online friends and when it comes to reality they
are just different and let people down.
In conclusion, I suggest that we should open ourself to a Accept comma addition
reality, they
technology
changes. But, don't let technology
fool us. We should be more careful and values life.Submitted by Silvia angelica on
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