Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Sometimes it is argued that,
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topic in my essay below.
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,
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means, generally those countries are democratic countries, in which people will have
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right. India and many other countries in the world are democratic countries and we are fortunate to have
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opportunity. In my opinion, it is a must. Everybody must be respected, must be given equal rights, regardless of whether he is a rich or poor, black or white, young or old, male or female.
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, we will have a good and healthy environment.
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is at country level.
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,
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must be given at home
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, to the female and to the children
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. Nowadays,
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is followed in the big cities at homes. Unlike to cities,
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is not followed in rural area. Male and elderly dominate the house. Generally, females and children are suppressed there.
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, my friend is from a rural area. He said his personal incident. After the death of his father, he was shivering even to touch his father's dead body. Generally, in the cities, ladies and children will have
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, one of my friend's son, because of
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, he was arguing at early stages. Later on he reached to the heights of not obeying at all to his parents. Unlike, democratic countries, there are countries who have kings and dictators.
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, China has dictatorship and has no
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, people are suppressed there. Some people argue that, there should be
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for the development and growth of the economy and the country. In case of democratic countries, always there are opposition parties interfering in each and every matter where the government cannot take the bold decisions.
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, to conclude, in my opinion,
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must be given but it should be balanced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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