Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

Nowadays, majority of under-developed countries are facing a number of sensitive issues. But burgeoning

population

growth is one of the major trouble.

As a result

, officials are charging

huge amount

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a huge amount

huge amounts

of taxes to decline

this

alarming trend.

However

, in my opinion,

this

can adversely affect the country’s development.

To begin

with, there are innumerable methods which officials can apply to decrease the rate of

population

.

Firstly

, there is a strong need of the hour to empower women’s education. It is a widely held view that in a number of states less than half of

ladies

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the ladies

are illiterate.

Hence

, there is no family planning which is

significant reason

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a significant reason

for

surge

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a surge

the surge

in

population

.

Secondly

, child marriage is

most common issue

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the most common issue

in countries like India, Pakistan and Bangladesh.

For instance

, women who

is married

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are married

marry

at an age of thirteen years has almost 27 percent more birth rates compared to, women which are married at an age of eighteen years.

Additionally

, governments should devise a long-term strategy to educate

peoples

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people

.

Thus

, educated persons know the consequences faced by

authorities including

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authorities, including

increasing pollution, poverty, unemployment etc.

Moreover

,

administration

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the administration

should run awareness campaigns to instruct about contraceptive techniques.

Consequently

, it will help us to reduce the

population

.

Although

, there is one drastic

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

if we impose

prodigious amount

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a prodigious amount

the prodigious amount

of taxation.

For example

, China was

first country

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the first country

to adopt

this

strategy as “one child policy” and stringent measures were taken against those abiding it. As a consequence, it drastically increased the age of inhabitants.

On the contrary

, young minds are best suited for progress of

country

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the country

a country

. To conclude, ministries should make medical facilities

cheap so

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cheap, so

it is available for everyone living in rural areas.

In addition

, there should be more awareness campaigns for people about birth control techniques along with,

this

educating woman should be our

first

priority.