Some governments say how many children a family can have in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
Nowadays, majority of under-developed countries are facing a number of sensitive issues. But burgeoning
population
growth is one of the major trouble. Use synonyms
As a result
, officials are charging Linking Words
huge amount
of taxes to decline Suggestion
a huge amount
huge amounts
this
alarming trend. Linking Words
However
, in my opinion, Linking Words
this
can adversely affect the country’s development.
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To begin
with, there are innumerable methods which officials can apply to decrease the rate of Linking Words
population
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, there is a strong need of the hour to empower women’s education. It is a widely held view that in a number of states less than half of Linking Words
ladies
are illiterate. Suggestion
the ladies
Hence
, there is no family planning which is Linking Words
significant reason
for Suggestion
a significant reason
surge
in Suggestion
a surge
the surge
population
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, child marriage is Linking Words
most common issue
in countries like India, Pakistan and Bangladesh. Suggestion
the most common issue
For instance
, women who Linking Words
is married
at an age of thirteen years has almost 27 percent more birth rates compared to, women which are married at an age of eighteen years.
Suggestion
are married
marry
Additionally
, governments should devise a long-term strategy to educate Linking Words
peoples
. Suggestion
people
Thus
, educated persons know the consequences faced by Linking Words
authorities including
increasing pollution, poverty, unemployment etc. Accept comma addition
authorities, including
Moreover
, Linking Words
administration
should run awareness campaigns to instruct about contraceptive techniques. Suggestion
the administration
Consequently
, it will help us to reduce the Linking Words
population
. Use synonyms
Although
, there is one drastic Linking Words
affect
if we impose a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
prodigious amount
of taxation. Suggestion
a prodigious amount
the prodigious amount
For example
, China was Linking Words
Linking Words
first country
to adopt Suggestion
the first country
this
strategy as “one child policy” and stringent measures were taken against those abiding it. As a consequence, it drastically increased the age of inhabitants. Linking Words
On the contrary
, young minds are best suited for progress of Linking Words
country
.
To conclude, ministries should make medical facilities Suggestion
the country
a country
cheap so
it is available for everyone living in rural areas. Accept comma addition
cheap, so
In addition
, there should be more awareness campaigns for people about birth control techniques along with, Linking Words
this
educating woman should be our Linking Words
first
priority.Linking Words
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