some people believe that with all the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is complete waste of resources do you agree or disagree

Extravagence
Suggestion
Extravagant
spending on
space
research
on out of
space
research
is often considered a bad investment mainly because of a fact that there are multiple
rconcerns
be relevant to
concerns
on
this
planet. I completely agree with
this
notion.
This
eassay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will explore how
world
resources could be used for the
reduction
Accept comma addition
reduction, poverty
poverty
,
provision
Suggestion
the provision
of medical facilities and reduction of chronic food shortages, rather than spending uncertain games.
Firstly
,
poverty
is the biggest challenge of the 21st century with millions
odf
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
off
living under
poverty
line without the basic necessity of life.
This
problem can be
evadicated
move out of an unsafe location into safety
evacuated
by relocating the funding
from
Suggestion
for
space
research
.
For example
, a report published in
north
Suggestion
North
ameria
North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776
America
revealed that
trillians
one million million
trillions
of dollars invested by the US
alon
without any others being included or involved
alone
were enough to take billions out of
poverty
.
Thus
, priority should be given to helping humanity on earth rather than spending on
space
research
programs.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
lack of medical facilities is another great concern that the
world
is facing. Reason being the inappropriate use of financial resources. In many parts of the
world people
Accept comma addition
world, people
died with a
cureable
curing or healing is possible
curable
diseases
Suggestion
disease
, the funding being wrongly
assign
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assigned
to
space
programes
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
programmers
can protect people
form
a giver or sender
from
dying
unnecessary
Suggestion
unnecessarily
.
For instance
, the high infant mortality ratio in Africa will easily
curtailed
Suggestion
curtail
with around half of the money spend on
space
programs
bt
introduces something in contrast or unexpected
but
by
beat
Russia, US and China.
Hence
saving lives is far-more far more superior program
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
any
space
program.
Finally
, chronic food shortages around the
world
need urgent attention as well. With
famin
an acute insufficiency
famine
farming
and
drought millions
Accept comma addition
drought, millions
of people die because of extreme hunger. The money
from
Suggestion
for
space
exploration can be used to curb
this
problem forever.
Therefore
, the investment from the
space
programs can be redirected to helping
humaity
the quality of being humane
humanity
on earth. To
sumup
Suggestion
sum up
, with all the problems to griping the humanity. The lavish sum of money spent on
space
does not seems
Suggestion
does not seem
justified a more appropriate use would be to
spent
Suggestion
spend
it on reduction of
poverty
,
provision
Suggestion
the provision
of medical facilities and to overcome shortage of food.
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