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some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this,

#people #music #cultures #ages
It is a general belief that a
song
 can bring some feelings to different people from different countries
,
Accept space
,
no matter how old or young they are.I agree with
this
 because I think that a
song
 can be like a universal language for everybody, you have to listen and to feel the rhythm. Nowadays, we live in a world with many opportunities and young people have many ways to spend their free time.It is very know that the most wanted activity is a concert.
For example
, a very know
music band
Suggestion
music bands
a music band
 like Cold play can bring together many people from around the world, from children to oldest.There are many fans who cross the word to follow them in order to see and hear them in their concerts.Another good example can be a
song
 between the two youngest at their weeding, with that
song
 they keep a very nice memory from that day.Many people listen to
music
 from other countries, even
in
Suggestion
after
 they do not understand the language of that
song
, for them is important the feeling and the rhythm.An example in
this
 sense is the Greek
music
 who has many fans because is very happy and encourage people to dance and party. In our modern life
,
Accept space
,
many psychologists include
music
 in their therapy on patients.
Music
 is very relaxing and gives a good vibes for people.
Moreover
, a lot of biologists sustain that there are some songs who help
plants
Suggestion
plant
 growth and is very used in grow houses. In conclusion,
music
 is like a therapy, is used in a very large area like health, entertainment, cinema and it does not matter from where you are, what language you speak,
music
 is a universal way to communicate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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