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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the global environmental problems have become one of the most challenging issues all over the world. Since fossil fuels have a significant impact on global environmental matters, some experts argue that increasing the cost of
fuel
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 would be best solved. From my vantage point, increasing the rate of combustion in household expenditure would be effective, in case other measures accompanied by. On the one hand, according to a lot of research done in world bank organization, burning fossil fuels (
such
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 as petroleum, natural gas and coal) is the major blame of global environmental problems. Statistics have shown these fuels are allocated the primary energy sources in many factories and transportation modes. The more fossil fuels burn, the worst environmental situations.
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, many scientists recommend increasing the cost of
fuel
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 as an effective method to cut down the consumption of fossil
fuel
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 and promote the environmental situations. So, if the governments consider strict rules to cut down the consumption of
fuel
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 in the societies, the environment, certainly, will be in better situations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • emissions
  • alternative energy
  • conservation
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy technologies
  • affordability
  • collective action
  • innovation in energy efficiency
  • global cooperation
  • environmental measures
  • pollution
  • economic disparity
  • revenue
  • sustainable development
  • environmental sustainability
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