The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students .Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

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Physical
education
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has become the important subject in the curriculum of students.Physical
fitness is must
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fitness is a must
for everyone.Due to
this
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,
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
schools provide
physical
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a physical education program
physical education program
physical education programme
physical education programs
education
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programm either as
mandatory subject
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a mandatory subject
or as optional.
To begin
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with, undeniably
,
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,
physical
education
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is an integral component of
healthy lifestyle
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a healthy lifestyle
. It is proved that by doing some exercises people can boost up their stamina and resistance power. Physical activities as a part of
daily routine
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the daily routine
can
strong
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stronger
the immune system. A medical study
has showed
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has shown
that people can get
rif
relieve from
rid
of various ailments like obesity,
diabeties
a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
and heart attack etc.
which
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Which
would be reason of
longlasting
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long lasting
life.
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, not only physical health gets
improved but
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improved, but
mental health too.
Furthermore
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, having programmes like
this
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refresh student's mind and regenerates energy which helps them to concentrate on other subjects
consequently
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.
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.
By participating in some physical
activities students
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activities, students
learn team spirit
,
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,
co-operation
joint operation or action
cooperation
, co-existence which
are
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is
applicable in real life too. Even students adopt enthusiasm of being competitive which
plays
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play
is playing
pivotal role in these days
.
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.
I believe that school authorities ought to make physical
education
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obligatory like other subjects. In conclusion, physical
education
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programmes are must in schools.
However
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, school's sovereignty should not impose
this
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class on specially
abled
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students and for
rest
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the rest
of
students
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the students
it should be required.
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