You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Boundary Road and I have recently read in the local newspaper that a shopping centre is going to be built near where I live.

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news was rather a surprise to me. I have been living in Boundary Road for five years now and it has always been a very quiet street with very few tall buildings. I think a construction like

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will change the atmosphere of the area considerably and, like many other residents I have spoken to, I am not at all happy about it. I think people who live in the area have a right to know more about the plan before it goes ahead, so I would like to request

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details regarding the dates of the planned building work and the size of the centre.

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, I sincerely hope you are planning to provide a car park, as

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parking will become very difficult for everyone in the area. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, John Carlson

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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