Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Adventurous sports are now a part of youth's lives. With a lot of weight in one's growth these sports are a way to escape everyday's problem. As the name suggests adventurous sports involve a high level of risk and can even cause death if not played properly. I disagree with the statement that these sports should be banned. In today's life everybody is involved in a rat race and has a stressful growth. By working 18 hours a day to fulfil his family's requirement. These sports activities act a way out from everyday's tension and stress
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: when a customer is involved in these activities
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as skydiving adrenaline rush in the blood is so high that a person forgets about his stress and enjoys that moment. While doing these activities a person releases his worries and dilemma. When that person goes back to his daily routine he remains calm and serene for a few days and these activities help people live a stress free life for a few days.
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, Many countries are now providing these sports activities as part of tourism. These countries,
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advertise these activities which in turn increase tourists and ultimately finance of a country are improved.
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: New Zealand provides an extreme adventure of Bungee jumping. It is known to be the longest bungee cord due to
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New Zealand attracts a lot of tourists every year. In conclusion, Extreme sports has now become a part of the soul.
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, it is dangerous, but it has positive side
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and these sports should not be banned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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