Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead being put behind the bars To what extent do you agree?

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Making prisoners do
community
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work
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serves a dual purpose, it works towards the betterment of the
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community,
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community, it also
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it gives an opportunity to the prisoners to contribute back to the
society
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and a chance for redemption. While I do agree the prisoners should be made to do unpaid
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work
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, there is
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the risk of exposing criminal to the
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, creating an unmitigated risk factor.
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work
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helps the prisoners to be in touch with
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community
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the community
, rather than staying in isolation.
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would make their post prison life an easier transition, which would be helpful for both the criminal as well as the
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. If the person stays in isolation or along with other prisoners all the time, the mental state of a person can be affected and it may detriment the good in him. There have been so many instances, where people cannot gel in with
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after being behind the bars for longer duration, due to their experiences in prison.
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, exposure of
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work
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, would help the prisoner to be in touch with their sane side, but it
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acts as an unprecedented risk for the
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. Few prisoners may take
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as an opportunity to escape, concurrently some might vent out their frustration on the
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.
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, there is learning curve for the
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as well. While prisoners are working with the
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, they shouldn't be treated with demeaning behaviour,
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people should not be scared, making them feel different. In conclusion,
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work
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is a viable option, but it cannot be applied to all the prisoners, some can be actually dangerous to the
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and the ones that are selected should be put under strict measures, along with us as
society
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accepting it as a normal.
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