Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: .give details of how you and friends or family use the centre .explain why sport and leisure centre is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to express the need
of
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for
Correct article usage
a sport
sport
and leisure Fix the agreement mistake
sports
centre
as it is going to close soon due to
local
council's decision.
During my exams, I always Correct article usage
the local
use
to play in Wrong verb form
used
sports
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the sports
centre
to divert my mind out of
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from
studies
and sometimes Correct pronoun usage
my studies
use
to play with my family and friends too. Me and my friends are using Wrong verb form
used
this
centre
since we were 10 years old and now we all are about to turn 25, there are many good memories attached with
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to
this
centre
.
Furthermore
, this
centre
is very much
important for our local community as many elderly Fix the agreement mistake
apply
people
are able to sit and talk together. There are also
many new families who are expanding their network by meeting new people
at this
centre
.
However
, closure
of Correct article usage
the closure
this
centre
will impact many people
. Specially
, Replace the word
Especially
people
like me who have their memories attached and this
centre
is the best place to explore with family and friends. Many people
are likely to get
affected Verb problem
be
with
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by
this
decision.
Please let me know if anything changes regarding this
decision.
Yours sincerely,
Tirth ThakkarSubmitted by tirththakkar23 on
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Enhance your task achievement by providing more varied and detailed examples of how the centre benefits the community, and by suggesting potential solutions or alternatives to its closure.
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You've successfully addressed all parts of the task, offering personal experiences and explaining the community impact of the proposed centre closure.
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Your greeting and closing are properly formatted, contributing to a suitable writing tone for the context of the letter.