Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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In todays time there are more employees working from

home

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and more children studying from

home

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, the reason is that

computer

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automation is easily available and more affordable. I think

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a negative trend.

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with the trend of working and learning from

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is beneficial below are the two main reasons for it.

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due the latest

technology

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and its affordability everything can be easily available

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due to latest pandemic of Covid-19 many of companies have opted to let there employees to work from

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this

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wouldn’t be possible if the

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technology

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was not there and even due internet availability and reach lot of students are able to talk there teachers and even the lectures are able to share their knowledge, to their students.

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Secondly due

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Secondly, due

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easily available to employees the companies spend on the campus and travel expense have been cut-down.

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, there are many benefits of

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technology there

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technology, there

are many disadvantages to

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also

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. As you see that in recent times due to the

technology

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and internet many of students have less physical activity and they tend to spend most of time in front of their

computer

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screens due which there is more strain on eyes and eyesight may become weak.

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Secondly work

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Secondly, work

from

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situation many of employees spend most of time sitting at

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. Due which they may face some other health issues. To conclude with the advantages and disadvantages of

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technology

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I think that disadvantage will ha dou

ble impact

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pact on the people

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Fully explain your ideas

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