As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
With an increasing use of transports, many people use their private cars to commute and considered acquiring more
car
Use synonyms
ownership
. Owning private Use synonyms
transport
Use synonyms
bring
many benefits, Suggestion
brings
however
, using more cars can increase pollution and makes climate change become worst.
Linking Words
Firstly
, Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
ownership
Use synonyms
bring
many advantages to Suggestion
brings
car
owners to commute as it provides convenient and feeling more comfortable driving their own Use synonyms
car
. People can drive cars to various places for Use synonyms
varity
of reasons in a long distance. Suggestion
a variety
variety
For example
, shopping, travelling, Linking Words
sighseeing
, etc. Having their own going about to look at places of interest
sightseeing
transport
Use synonyms
Secondly
, owning a Linking Words
car
brings many benefits for Use synonyms
olderly and disability person
to commute more freely and Suggestion
elderly and disabled persons
elderly and disability person
elderly and disabled people
the elderly and disabled person
olderly and disabled person
elderly and disabled person
conveintly
to different places in a convenient manner
conveniently
such
as hospital Linking Words
appoinment
, supermarket, or visiting friend and family, etc. the act of putting a person into a non-elective position
appointment
Olderly person
Suggestion
An elderly person
Elderly person
The elderly person
have
difficulty with movement and cannot travelling by foot so owning Suggestion
has
trasport
will bring great benefits to them.
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
Undouthbly
, increasing of Suggestion
car
Use synonyms
ownership
Use synonyms
also
make the climate change become worst. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
car
is a type of transports that produce more carbon dioxide level in the Use synonyms
atmostphere
which will have a particular environment or surrounding influence
atmosphere
negative impact
on environmental changes. Most of carbon dioxide comes from Suggestion
a negative impact
transport
use from around the world which Use synonyms
also
affect physical health for respiratory system to work more intensively, as a Linking Words
consequences
, the world population may have lower life expectancy rates.
Suggestion
consequence
On the other hand
, due to an increasing of Linking Words
car
ownerships can Use synonyms
causes
road congestion which is already Suggestion
cause
occuring
worldwide. come to pass
occurring
For example
, stuck in the traffic jam can cause stress and bring negative emotion to people on the street. Linking Words
Moreover
, some people may stuck in the traffic for too long Linking Words
resuting
being late at work. a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
resulting
Additionally
, traffic jam can Linking Words
also
block the road for emergency services Linking Words
on
the stressful time.
In conclusion, many people prefer to purchase Suggestion
at
Use synonyms
car
to commute, Suggestion
a car
however
, having too many cars Linking Words
also
bring negative impact on the whole population of the country. Linking Words
Goverment
must Suggestion
Government
empasise
on using more public special importance or significance
emphasis
emphasise
emphasize
Use synonyms
transport which
will reduce the number of Accept comma addition
transport, which
car
Use synonyms
ownership
.Use synonyms
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