There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

There are a lot
of
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of different music
music
different types, as
music
feeds the human being soul and makes the
heat flies
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heat, flies
heart flies
from happiness,
music
give your mind the ability of sweet dreams while you are not sleeping,
that is
why each
music
type is matching some
spicific
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
taste. Yes
music
with its
varaities covers
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varieties, covers
varieties covers
everyone everywhere
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everyone, everywhere
world wide. All need
music
all time, we hear
music
when we are happy and when we are sad, we need
music
to dance, we love musing while driving, cooking,
music
gives everything its meaning, without the
music
you could not feel the movie, movie sound track is very important in cenima industry, oscar award to be given to the best sound track of the nominated movies .
we
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We
can not
imajne
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
our daily life without
music
,
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,
music
is a part of our
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, you
walk
be awake, be alert, be there
wake
up every day early morning on the mobile alarm
,
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,
this
alarm is a nice piece of
music
which had been
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
choose
by yourself as a sign for
stating
a turn to be a starter (in a game at the beginning)
starting
the day, your ringing tone of your mobile is
also
a nice
music
of
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on
a song or part of
movie sound track
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a movie soundtrack
movie soundtrack
the movie soundtrack
movie soundtracks
.
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.
The
music
is like our ID, each type of
music
is
identifing
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identifying
a person,
That
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that's
That's
why different
music
types and different personalities. So we can tell that your Sound Cloud Playing List on your mobile is a part of your identification card. In my opinion the
music
also
difine
argue or speak in defense of
defended
well the countries, you may hear the
irish
of or relating to or characteristic of Ireland or its people
Irish
music
and
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
course you will know directly
that is
from
ireland
an island comprising the republic of Ireland and Northern Ireland
Ireland
. The
samething
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same thing
for
scotish
the dialect of English used in Scotland
Scottish
,
chaines
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
chains
,
egyptian
the ancient and now extinct language of Egypt under the Pharaohs; written records date back to 3000 BC
Egyptian
,
lebanis
of or relating to or characteristic of Lebanon or its people
Lebanese
music
and so on, each nation has its oriental
music
and
that is
connected
also
with greeting the flag
,
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,
every single country has its own
music
while any event ceremonies.
however
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However
the international
music
is very important in connecting people, it is an art language which can be understood by anyone anywhere.
people
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People
can
comunicate
transmit information
communicate
each others through
music
. I
prefere
like better; value more highly
prefer
to be open to the other nations
music
and to be up to date with all types of
music
and to listen to what I like not with ears to listen with my heart.
Submitted by Marwa Ibrahim on

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