Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children, while others think parents need not do that, as children can read books, watch TV or movies by themselves.
Parents take care of their children at every step. While some people believe that parents should teach children different stories, others believe that parents should not involve in that as children have the
ability
to understand and analyse those stories and lessons by themselves.
There are many benefits of teaching children by parents on stories. Children can understand stories by reading themselves, but not up to the level as older people can. As they grow up, their analysing ability
also
will increase. Hence if
parents make them understand stories by reading and translating, they can understand much better. Not only that, if children start reading and watching stories by themselves, there is a possibility of misunderstanding the concept of stories (If Moral stories), and Accept comma addition
Hence, if
also
the possibility of choosing the bad programs and stories by themselves. For instance
, old people always advise parents to teach children good moral stories, which are used for them to improve and understand the values of a human being.
However
, some people believe that parents should not always hold children for each and every step, as they read books, watch TV, so have the ability
to understand the stories by reading themselves. People say that there are a lot of differences in today’s children compared to older days. It is proved that these day’s children have the ability
to understand the situations and act according to that, they don't only read stories but also
can teach to others. For example
, in today’s schools, children who have just started school can learn and involve in multiple tasks much faster than their parents.
To sum up, though today’s children have the ability
to analyse situations and stories much better, it is always the responsibility of parents to look after on how well they understand it. It depends on each child, how good they analyse.Submitted by 鄭又端 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite