some people believe that after child enters School their teachers influence more than the parents to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Many people think that as soon as children go to school, teachers have more control on their behaviour than parents have. I partly agree with
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statement and believe that it depends on a child as well.
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of all, it is true that teachers have force on children as students spend their most part of the time at school with teachers and friends. Since
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grade teachers bring up them, teach them, give them knowledge and advices, students get used to their manner of communication.
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, if teachers are strict, students will afraid of them giving a bad mark and study harder.
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, during the breaks, since the students study in high school, they go to teachers and communicate with them, sometimes teachers can manner well and leave a good impression,
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, sometimes they are able to spoil children with their opinions and advices.
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of all, I believe that parents have more impact on their children, because it depends on their breed. Because parents are with their students since their birth.
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, parents teach children a good manners, everything start from home.
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, they teach them how to communicate with older people, they breed in their children kindness.
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, when child gossips about his friends or someone else, parents must say that it is very impolite to discuss someone behind, after all I think that not every teacher can teach them to it, some of them can gossip behind with the children. To conclude, I want to say that it depends on the children, but
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, I strongly believe that parents have more impact on their children than teachers do.
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