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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Good handwriting of children is one of the essential skill for their academic success. Some people believe that handwriting skill has not remained important for students in
this
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 technical era. I strongly condemn.
This
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the arguments
 against the given statement in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
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, there are ample of evidences why handwriting is still imperative to learn
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from
 children.
Firstly
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, it is
much effective way
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a much more effective way
much more effective way
 of
learn
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learning
 something. As, when students will practice the topic by writing, they can remember that thing for
long term
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the long term
.
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, it is helpful to solve mathematic problem and learn the formulas by writing.
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, handwriting skills
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 useful to enhance children's vocabulary, which is not possible by typing on a computer. Because computer and mobile phone have the option of
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 their wrong spelling and they do not require much effort.
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However when
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However, when
 they write spelling by hand, they memorize it automatically. It is
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concluded
 clear that handwriting
skills improve
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skills, improve
 their learning and increase knowledge.
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, good handwriting is
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 helpful for children to get good scores in
exam
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the exam
exams
, as it puts a solid impression on
examiner
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the examiner
. If they write the exam in
neat and clean way
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a neat and clean way
, they can easily able to get good marks only on the behalf of better writing.
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, good handwriting is
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 appreciated by everyone and students have
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a great reputation
 among classmates and teachers who have good handwriting. By analysing data from aforementioned paragraphs, it can be concluded that learning to handwriting skill is significant and should be taught to children. As well as it should not be ignored.
Submitted by Gurpreet Kaur on

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