Some people say advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss these views and give your opinion.

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It is argued by a set of individuals that broadcasting is useful in convincing the public to purchase items while others believe it is so pedestrian to the point where people find it irrelevant. In my opinion, advertising can never be saturated because people’s constant demand of items. On one hand, people think brand influencing has no effect on people anymore
as a result
of the outdated template being used. The style and manner which advertising agencies use currently has been in existence for quite some time now and is not suitable for the current age and
market
. Evidence of
this
is seen in the
market
approach used by Coca-Cola company in Nigeria who decided to change their template of advertising by employing the services of prominent individuals on social media to push the products to online to the youth in the country and
this
decision caused a significant surge in their sales compared to their counterparts who kept on advertising in newspapers.
Additionally
, people think adverts are ordinary because the businesses restrict their target
market
to
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for
a particular set of
individuals but
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individuals, but
after a while of constant patronage, these customers no longer require the services or products
thus
finding the adverts irrelevant.
On the other hand
, people claim brand broadcasting is useful
at
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in
convincing the public to patronize and I agree.
This
is because the world is constantly demanding and for
this
need to be met, businesses have to constantly push their products
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to
their
targets
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target
market
to see. A good example can be seen in a logistic business called DHL as there was a time when items were sent and delivered via post offices until the owner decided to deliver items to people by himself and started handing out flyers to convincing people to patronize him as he could deliver their letters and items in a shorter timeframe than the post office. With increasing patronage and adverts from people’s referrals, the business grew and other people after seeing how successful it was joined. In conclusion,
although
a few people might think advertising has no influence on purchases, I believe it is pertinent for demands to be met.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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