You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service. -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am very happy with your service provided at

last

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weekend's

party

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. It was a great

party

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with delightful service. The

party

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was organised to celebrate the success of the company . As we discussed on the phone about the details of the

party

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such

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as light music in the background and different kinds of cuisine provided to guests . It went smoothly and every guest enjoyed the taste of music

as well as

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dance on the floor. I am pleased with the wonderful service provided to our VIP guests. Everyone at the

party

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was satisfied with the arrangements of food ,especially cocktails and live performances. I would like to suggest that if you add more staff next time that it would be easy to manage guests and decorations could be done on time .

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this

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, everything went wonderful and I hope we will organise more parties at your place. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur

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Try to expand on each main point to add more depth to your letter.

greeting closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

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The letter addresses all parts of the prompt effectively.

coherence

The letter is logically structured and easy to follow.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service. -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

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