You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service. -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make

#party #company #hotel #manager #-describe #-explain #service #-suggest #improvements

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am very happy with your service provided at

last

weekend's

party

. It was a great

party

with delightful service. The

party

was organised to celebrate the success of the company . As we discussed on the phone about the details of the

party

such

as light music in the background and different kinds of cuisine provided to guests . It went smoothly and every guest enjoyed the taste of music

as well as

dance on the floor. I am pleased with the wonderful service provided to our VIP guests. Everyone at the

party

was satisfied with the arrangements of food ,especially cocktails and live performances. I would like to suggest that if you add more staff next time that it would be easy to manage guests and decorations could be done on time .

Apart from

this

, everything went wonderful and I hope we will organise more parties at your place. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal Kaur

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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