You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service. -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am very happy with your service provided at last
weekend's party
. It was a great party
with delightful service.
The party
was organised to celebrate the success of the company . As we discussed on the phone about the details of the party
such
as light music in the background and different kinds of cuisine provided to guests . It went smoothly and every guest enjoyed the taste of music as well as
dance on the floor.
I am pleased with the wonderful service provided to our VIP guests. Everyone at the party
was satisfied with the arrangements of food ,especially cocktails and live performances.
I would like to suggest that if you add more staff next time that it would be easy to manage guests and decorations could be done on time . Apart from
this
, everything went wonderful and I hope we will organise more parties at your place.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal KaurSubmitted by kmlchahal97 on
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