Some parents believe cell phones are harmful to children, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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it is thought by some guardians that mobile phones have tremendous detrimental effects on children's mental and physical health, other parents think that
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phones are not harmful for kids. In my opinion, I consider that children's fitness and academic performance, adversely affected by
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phones' usage. On the one hand, some people believe that children should not use mobile phones due to significant negative impacts on their physical health and I agree.
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, spending a considerable amount of
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on digital screen could badly affect kids' eyesight and ultimately lead to weak eye power in early age. Along with
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, children sitting with mobile phones generally avoid physical activities and sports that eventually lead to various health issues later in life
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as, obesity, diabetes and several other illnesses.
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, children, who are using
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phones for the exceedingly massive amount of
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, could get mentally disturb.
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, digital devices' access to kids leads to expose them to all sorts of negativity in the world in the form of heartbreaking, shocking and other news that could result in the serious mental disturbances and children could behave aggressively or could be in a shocking state.
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, children addicted to mobile phones could not perform well in their studies.
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, these days, parents talk to kids via social networking apps, namely,
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and in the early age of study, children get addicted
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to getting
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to chat
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on these mobile apps.
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,
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negatively affect their academic performance in the school and result in poor grades.
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, some people think that
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phones are having some benefits for children. One positive aspect is that kids used with digital phones can contact their parents easily at the
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of emergency. To illustrate, children, who is keeping mobile phones, can update any adverse situation that could arise like lost in the city or experienced some kinds of accidents but these conditions are rare. Another benefit is that access to
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phone at an early age do their school homework, independently. As an example, nowadays all information is instantly available on google and its immensely helpful for children to retrieve any answer. In conclusion, While people may vary in their opinion, I believe that digital phones have extremely damaging effects on children's wellbeing and school performances. Parents should think cautiously and ought not to permit mobile phone usage to mitigate the these awful effects of
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phones.

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