Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future careers. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether attending college and
university
or leaving school and gain work experience would be better to prepare students for future jobs still remains at the forefront of the discussion. Use synonyms
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On the one hand, that leaving school to gain work experience does have one significant. Namely, it allows school leavers to test the water before they fully commit to themselves to a specific role in a company or industry. Especially in the case undergraduates have not figured out their passion, Linking Words
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advantages
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comes all from the top universities of the world including Harvard, Standford, etc.
In conclusion, my conviction is that students should be urged to attend college or continuing in the same way
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