Many people claim that all zoos should be closed, while others claim that zoos have a positive impact. Discuss both views and gove your opinion.

In the past few decades, there has been a profound increase in the number of individuals questioning the necessity of

zoos

. On one side of the spectrum, there are those who believe that keeping

animals

in the zoo has contributed to our understanding of the animal kingdom.

However

, others, including myself, strongly oppose

this

view and

instead

believe that a zoo is merely a place of animal cruelty.

To begin

, there is an argument to be made that

zoos

have allowed for scientific advancement

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animal studies and

education

.

For instance

, scientists have been able to document endangered snow leopard mating and feeding behaviours, which later

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to the development of protection programmes.

For

this

reason, it is clearly evident that keeping

animals

in an enclosure is highly valuable to animal studies, as

this

can contribute to our

knowledge

as well as

animal conservation. What is more, the general consensus amongst educators is that

zoos

are an exceptional place for children to gain exposure and an understanding of rare and exotic animal species,

otherwise

they would only see these precious creatures in textbooks and on TV.

This

being the case, it is not unreasonable to assume that if

zoos

were to close, our

knowledge

of wild

animals

would be limited and our children’s valuable

education

would be significantly harmed.

Nonetheless

, despite the fact that

zoos

can provide crucial

knowledge

and

education

on

animals

, there is a growing body of evidence to suggest that animal cruelty stemming from these enclosures is a significant issue that cannot be overlooked. To illustrate

this

point, two pandas gifted from China to Germany both died in 2008

due to

their maladaptation to the new zoo.

Therefore

, it is undeniable that forcing

animals

to live in an unnatural habitat is a form of torture, providing no benefit nor protection to an already endangered species.

Furthermore

, even if these

animals

were to survive, keeping

animals

in

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is a complete disregard

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animal welfare and often leads to depression and self-harming behaviour in these creatures. With

this

in mind, there is no doubt that if

zoos

continue to stay open, more

animals

will suffer and precious lives will be lost, merely in the name of science.

To conclude

from the aforementioned discussion, whilst some are under the impression that

zoos

provide valuable

knowledge

and

education

in animal studies, others, myself included, strongly believe that these institutions are built on the cruelty and sacrifice of

animals

in

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. From my perspective, I am of the fierce belief that

animals

deserve the same rights as humans and must have an undisturbed life in their own habitats.