Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Life
has many phases to from childhood to the old age
Accept comma addition
age, stage
stage
and enjoyment linked to each level, but a group of people think that adolescent stage
is the most celebration and joyful years of one’s life
whilst others argue that adulthood
is more enjoyable even with the duties on their shoulders. In this
essay, we will discuss both sides if the argument and in my view mature
age is more fulfilling.
To embark on, Suggestion
matures
majority
of the youngsters are naive and Suggestion
the majority
a majority
are totally depended
on their parents. They are happy with whatever they have and are free of responsibility. They are not much concerned with achievements, their minds are still Suggestion
are totally depending
totally depend
at
learning stages following their dreams and passion. Practically, most of them have not faced any difficulties in Suggestion
in
life
. For instance
, young people in my neighbor
hood, their concern is education, scoring good marks in exams and taking part in sports events a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
however
, it’s not the same case compare to adulthood
.
Furthermore
, during adulthood
that is
during mid 20s and above, people are mature and think independently. They have grown social and communication skills can differentiate between good and bad. Despite of having responsibilities and facing real life
problems at this
stage
of life
, they enjoy the life
to the fullest. Every day is a challenging day, meeting new people opens new opportunities along the path, there is sence
of achievement. To illustrate, cracking the interview with the job offer in hand and going to Suggestion
a sense
sense
office
for the Suggestion
the office
first
time all this
are jolly times of life
. Juveniles will experience all this
in the next
stage
of life
.
To conclude, happy years are not the same for all the person
, Suggestion
people
persons
although
for most of them golden age is teenage for me adulthood
is more memorable and happiness
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happy
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