As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Nowadays, people are buying more cars as the country develops.
Therefore
, some people believe that it is a positive development, while others disagree. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both the arguments in detail and provide evidence as to why, Linking Words
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trend is disadvantageous.
The main advantage is people can go for any pursuits whenever at any time. Public transports have a fixed schedule for citizens and it is hard for folks to go for shopping or work depending on their time schedule. Linking Words
For instance
, my dad has a car and we have no problem doing our business, Linking Words
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as picking up my younger brother from school or going on a road trip. Linking Words
Hence
, using cars as our transportation is more comfortable and may save up a lot of time rather than using buses or trains.
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On the other hand
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trend is causing pollutions throughout the city. Cars are producing noise and air pollution, which affects the environment harshly. Linking Words
For example
, in Ulaanbaatar, many kids are being poisoned due to the air pollution, Linking Words
moreover
, elderly people have been affected by the noise pollution and suffering from respiratory. Linking Words
Although
, it is easier to transport, the disadvantages of Linking Words
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trend outweighs the advantages.
In conclusion, an increasing number of people are buying cars in our modern society, and it is being a positive development for the owners, but we cannot deny the negative effects it is causing to our environment. In short, the disadvantages outweighs the advantages.Linking Words
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